Laksmi, I think you need to add a to be "is" after you write "but part of your design". So it'll be "but part of your design is not safety". Keep writing!
Laksmi,I found some mistakes in your post. First, it should be "In my opinion, your product has...". Second, it should be"in my opinion," Third,I think you should "the" in front of this sentence "body of the truck". I also suggest that you put "I look forward..." to the next paragraph. Keep writing Laksmii
Laksmi, I think you need to add a to be "is" after you write "but part of your design". So it'll be "but part of your design is not safety". Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteyou should add "ed" in you trap because is passive form. Thankyou
ReplyDeleteLaksmi,I found some mistakes in your post.
ReplyDeleteFirst, it should be "In my opinion, your product has...".
Second, it should be"in my opinion,"
Third,I think you should "the" in front of this sentence "body of the truck".
I also suggest that you put "I look forward..." to the next paragraph.
Keep writing Laksmii
thanks for your feed back guys :)
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